We were all made to do strange things in school. Things which did not seem weird in those days but now they certainly do, especially if one is really bad at them. I always had a terrible time in the Art and Craft classes, singing, card making, getting newspaper cuttings and sticking them in a scrapbook, story writing, basically everything that has got anything to do with being creative.To make matters worse, we were also awarded grades for such stuff.
Anyways, very recently I came across something in a notebook of my younger sister. I had been using it as a rough copy since her exams got over.Rohit drew my attention to a page in the notebook on which something had been scribbled by her. This was probably some assignment given by her teacher or some essay kind of thing. What I am posting here is the rough draft which was faired out later by her.
VAMIKA THE GREAT
Vamika Shrivastava is full of wonders. No one can challenge her. She is the type of creature who is full of power. She has a faith in god. She is one of the beautiful and wonderful girl. She is full of miracle. Her goal is to attain the goal. Vamika is great that is my नारा. She only loves god, education and parents. She is full of talent and skills. But her writing is ridiculous (सुभान अल्लाह). But she is full of power and attitude. We all admire her.Because we can't live without admiring her. you don't know anything about her but the fact is that she is full of talent. have you ever seen such a wonderful girl in your life. No so you can see Vamika now. है ना अच्छी?
हिम्मत सिर्फ़ एक इन्सान के पास है। guess करो..अरे यार उसका नाम है Vamika the Great.
She is a general knowledge.You can ask any complex question and she is ready with answer. जब तक सूरज चाँद रहेगा vamika का नाम रहेगा। Be as cool as Vamika. This is also known as अपने मुंह मियां मिट्ठू बनना.
ही ही ही
she is a good joker and makes you laugh. Ha! ha! ha! ha! ha!
Vamika Shrivastava is full of wonders. No one can challenge her. She is the type of creature who is full of power. She has a faith in god. She is one of the beautiful and wonderful girl. She is full of miracle. Her goal is to attain the goal. Vamika is great that is my नारा. She only loves god, education and parents. She is full of talent and skills. But her writing is ridiculous (सुभान अल्लाह). But she is full of power and attitude. We all admire her.Because we can't live without admiring her. you don't know anything about her but the fact is that she is full of talent. have you ever seen such a wonderful girl in your life. No so you can see Vamika now. है ना अच्छी?
हिम्मत सिर्फ़ एक इन्सान के पास है। guess करो..अरे यार उसका नाम है Vamika the Great.
She is a general knowledge.You can ask any complex question and she is ready with answer. जब तक सूरज चाँद रहेगा vamika का नाम रहेगा। Be as cool as Vamika. This is also known as अपने मुंह मियां मिट्ठू बनना.
ही ही ही
she is a good joker and makes you laugh. Ha! ha! ha! ha! ha!
I later learned from Chachi that in this assignment one had to praise oneself in such a manner that others may laugh and she didn't disappoint.She even received a "Good" in this assignment of hers. I seriously want to go back to the days when we could have written such stuff and worse, even get it checked by the teacher without feeling embarrassed.I want to go back to my school days again.. I want to be innocent again...
PS. Please don't judge her by the post above. She is an excellent poet who writes at will and is excellent at drawing.Also special thanks to Rohit, Jubin and Puneet Pamecha.
:) :) :P :P :D :D
ReplyDeleteshe has to be great...!!
with all that she wrote in rough in 8th class, she is making fans now... one can only guess what she must be upto now...
seriously, u cannot stop admiring her...
jab tak suraj chaand rahega, vamika tera naam rahega...!!
waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah! how cute!! it was so so so so so so very adorable!!
ReplyDeletethanks a million Rohit for bringing me here!!
Aviral, your sister rocks! give her a big hug from my side.. \m/
really aviral she must be real fun.. ... wonderful imagination n very cutely penned down... i read that 4 times that day in her copy ... let me tell that her writing was not at all bad.
ReplyDelete"I want to be innocent again..."
ReplyDeleteAs long as you want it, you wont be it.. do innocent people want to be innocent?
"I seriously want to go back to the days when we could have written such stuff"
You can write it NOW.. what are blogs for? :-)
PS - Do you really think the stuff was innocent?
@Rohit, Kajal and Jubin: Thanks a lot...I'll make her read the post above and your comments as well...:)
ReplyDeleteAnonymous: nice query about being innocent...but don't you think we all want to go back to our childhood...innocence is something which is once lost, is lost forever...it should not be confused with having other good qualities..i hope you got your answer...
ReplyDeleteI hope what i have written above answers the next question as well...
PS: Oh yes..the stuff was innocent... not an iota of doubt about that...
Cute one.
ReplyDeleteCame across another superb blogger...ur friend...Rohit Mishra...read some stuff of his...
Really good !